A place within me

Posted: January 30, 2013 by peytonporter1995 in PeytonP

There’s a place within me,

That no one seems to know.

Like a dark puddle,

You don’t know the depth of.

There’s a place within me,

That never seems to know.

Like the ocean during a storm,

Condescending and always second guessing.

Dark

Depressing

Dangerous

But I’m not sure if those describe me.

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Comments
  1. vjbc21 says:

    I like how you wrote…
    Dark
    Depressing
    Dangerous
    It really put reality on the poem.

  2. alisonadkins says:

    I like the last line of the poem, because it shows how you really feel.

  3. gracianarose13 says:

    I love the “like the ocean during a storm” line. It made me think of chaos and power, but in a form so beautiful and destructive at the same time. Very good.